Soooo, you've wrote your "moon myth" (first draft, ha!) and your just about ready to start the PowerPoint and present to your classmates. But.... a story is only good as the person you are reading it to. Soooooo, read your "moon myth" to a younger person and write how did they receive the story. Did they enjoy the story? Did they "get it" as in get what your "moon myth" was trying to explain about the moon (process or feature)? Finally, if they didn't like it, what could you improve with your story so it can be a hit when you finally present it to your classmates?
ONE PARAGRAPH (or more for extra credit :p )
8 comments:
Well when I read my moon myth to my little brother he liked it. Yet he told me that it talks about the history of the moon. But I like how he describe my moon myth because he gave me good comments. Also even though he is in second grade he still will get to learn about moon myth because of me. My little brother described my moon myth creativy and intersting. This is all for my Blog.
I read my moon myth to my younger sister and she said"It was ok".She said it was easy to read,it showed how the moon changed from night to night but it was just not fascinating.She enjoyed it because it was about the moon but thought "It could have been better".From her feedback I switched some things around from my moon myth and made it better.When I re-read it i found out why she said"It was ok" it was because it went off-topic a little.So I made her read it again and she said"WEll,it's better than the first one".That was my experience on telling my moon myth to my sister.
I read my moon myth to a younger person and they enjoyed it really well. They understood clearly my story about the moon.They new that my story wasn't suppose to be true with out me telling them that.They saw that i didn't only speak about one story of the moon but several.That person especially liked one of my stories called father moon.They said that my moon myth was perfect but that if i want more credit, to put more details.So, before i present it to my classmates,I'm going to try to do that. I'm really proud of my moon myth and hope to get a good grade for it.The person i read it to didn't hate anything about it,so i like that too.So, so far my moon myth is good and I'm ready to start doing my PowerPoint presentation.
One night there was a quarter moon. So every time that happens the people in the valley party. The reason for that is because there is going to be a half of moon the next night. so the next night came and there was a half of moon. They said that means that a full moon was two weeks away. The next day these people didn't expect his coming. All of a sudden there was a full moon. My story talks about the way the moon changes every night.
Well I had Read my Moon Myth to my little brothers, they had enjoyed it.They was enjoying ,but then again they didn't get it.I think they enjoyed the part when the moon was being genorous and letting his sister sit down,When there was no space on the Moon.The part that they did not get was how all of his friends were over the Moons house,and there was little space in his room.My Moon myth was trying to explain to explain the features of the moon,because in the Moon myth it says "Moon was not as bright,as he once was".MY younger Brothers liked it,I just needed to be more specific with the details.
When I read my moon myth to my niece she kind of like it.She gave me some idea about the story.There wasn't a good amount of details.To tell the truth when I read it there wasn't enough detail.Then I fix now it sound way better.And my myth is wolf that talk about how the moon changes.
I read my moon myth to my twin little brothers and they said they kind of understood it but didn't know what a moon myth was. So i asked them if they knew what a myth was and they said no. I explained what a myth was and told them that the story was basically a made up story about the moon and it's features. Then they understood it and said if I can read it again so that they can really think about it. I read it and they liked it and said it was good.
I read my moon myth to my little sister and she enjoyed hearing it. She understood clearly my story about the moon.She knew that my story wasn't suppose to be true with out me telling her that.Also my sister told me that she has also read and wrote moon myth's too. My sister also told me to change a couple things around and make it more fun and interesting so i did. From her feedback I switched some things around from my moon myth and made it better.When I re-read it i found out that making it more fun and interesting it would convince's people to read it and find it creativy. This is pretty much it for this BLOgG
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